Where Trees Once Stood”



“Where Trees Once Stood”

Darkness lay beside the moon
searching beamlight to consume
nourishment to render a new day
What of nighttime’s left to say
but that it came and that it went
time both busily and idly misspent

Daylight’s pale upon the trees
naked in their vulnerabilities
to careless trespassers cavorting by
What of spirits of the sky
that lie in waiting to possess
all the lights and all the darks
in timelessness

If fire crackles through the wood
and leaves its scent
where trees once stood-
a void of silence left by trail of death
Then with my deepest breath
I’ll breathe the smoke of sleep,
and forever in my dreams
their essence keep

For if in need of perpetuity,
these things not left to memory
born of yellowed dawn
and blackened night-
Then all for nothing moonbeam’s light
that rendered visions of the day
till spirits of the sky stole them away

About this poem

This poem speaks to the impermanence of life and our efforts to hold onto it via memory and spirituality.

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Written on March 11, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on June 23, 2023

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Scheme A xxbbcc ddeexdd acAffgxg hhxiibb
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 889
Words 169
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 7, 8, 7

Susan Mayer Brumel

A few years ago, I retired from a thirty-five year career in hospice counseling, at which time I began writing poetry. My poems are influenced by my patients’ journeys, the compelling beauty of nature, and the human condition. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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3 Comments
  • devonb.14033
    Breath taking work!
    Devon Bates2024©
    LikeReply 21 month ago
  • alanswansea18
    I love trees woods and leaves. Well done.
    LikeReply 17 months ago
  • Caliconine
    Beautiful. I enjoy your style
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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