Tongue-Tied (Silly Dillies)

Discuss the poem Tongue-Tied (Silly Dillies) with the community...

https://www.poetry.com/poem/195656/tongue-tied-(silly-dillies)

Newest Oldest Popular

6 Comments

 

Notify me of new comments via email.

Publish

• 

  Shocam

  This is a really spellbinding humorous poem. You are one of the best poets on this platform as you can tread masterfully in any genre of poetry there is

  LikeReply 13 months ago
  • 

    susan.brumel

    Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I appreciate your support. This one was a lot of fun to write. I’m glad you found it enjoyable.

    LikeReply3 months ago
• 

  karlcfolkes

  Lovely play on words, lovely beat, nice use of onomatopoeia with poetic contrasts; quite lyrical.
  May I invite you to read my most recent poem called: “The Enantiodromia Phenomenon of Human Affairs.” However, I’m afraid I got caught in the web of my own creation. more »

  LikeReply 13 months ago
  • 

    susan.brumel

    Thank you for your thoughtful critique, Karl. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I would be happy to read your recently posted poem!

    LikeReply3 months ago
• 

  Symmetry60

  But, of the two of us, I'm the one who should be committed? You tot you taw a putty tat!!! Somehow, I don't picture you as much of a lush, albeit, at times, I think it might be an option you could greatly benefit from. *snort* On a serious note, and as always, you write with grace and precision, Miss Suzie. Maybe, if you're lucky, I'll tell you my vomitous two-finger tequila adventures when I was bedding down with stupidity in Washington State mid-80s. Another excellent read and write, my dear. Thank God for the birth of your brain. ;-) more »

  LikeReply 13 months ago
  • 

    susan.brumel

    I did see a putty tat! What I douldn’t dee were doze dilly dwords! My brain and I thank you for your kind words, sir. :-)

    LikeReply3 months ago
• 

  Adroity

  Your poem beautifully captures the whimsical nature of words and the playful struggles of expression. The imagery of tangled words and the humorous attempts to unravel them make for an entertaining and light-hearted read. The playful language and the twist at the end with the tongue-twisting words falling to the ground add a fun and whimsical touch to the poem. more »

  LikeReply 14 months ago
  • 

    susan.brumel

    Thank you, Alex. I’m so glad you could appreciate the work that went into such a dilly poem. Your kind words are most appreciated. :-)

    LikeReply4 months ago
• 

  bjotap21

  I love this it's silly and creative and at the same time exactly what it's like for me sometimes when I have something really important to say but the receiver makes me nervous or I'm in anxiety over the reaction they give.. love this more »

  LikeReply 14 months ago
  • 

    susan.brumel

    Thank you! Exactly how I get sometimes. Especially the times I had to get up and speak in front of an audience-which I always tried to get out of- when my mouth would get so dry that I couldn’t even move my tongue to utter a word!
    I’m happy you appreciate my work.
    Waiting to see yours. more »

    LikeReply3 months ago
• 

  npirandy

  Ha! You would really be fun with a snoot full. I've had my share of tongue tied fiasco's too. Usually after about 8 beers.

  LikeReply 24 months ago
  • 

    susan.brumel

    You’re very funny, Randy. Needed to veer off the ‘butterflies and flowers’ poetry path for a bit. Nice to hear from you. :-)

    LikeReply4 months ago
  • 

    npirandy

    I ALWAYS enjoy your wonderful sense of humor along with a very rare talent.

    LikeReply 14 months ago
  • 

    susan.brumel

    Thanks, Randy. You’re too kind. I love that you think I’m funny. :-}

    LikeReply4 months ago