Victoria Harbor In The Rain



Victoria Harbor in the Rain
By William He

Continuous downpour of torrential rain,
Untethered tides of Stonecutters Island,
There are currents cascade down next to the curb.
The islands have spread a pall of gloom,
Overcasting weather turning ferocious,
Unleashing itself from the chains of thick clouds.
Sprinkles are dazzling with colorful lights.
The sky appears omnipotent with earth,
In the meek surrender once in a while.
Successive ages roll the interval,
A sound which shakes the bellowing waves and rocks.

In the misty lone land by the grey Victoria Bay.
The slow motion connects us with heaven,
To Tennyson's statue carved in stone.
In the reflections weary and frail,
Pebbles sink individuals woes deep,
Water which rain sheds will get us thoroughly wet.
The wattle-made thistles to some rivulet blue.
Night approaches and leaves again at night,
Mountains of torment settle in the chest.
Drowned enigma of yore dream does not illumine,
Touching sublime in timeless time.

望海潮 雨中维多利亚港
作者:何威廉

湍波溟渤,
昂洲横亘,
香炉攒落天流。
离岛雾岑,
层空下载,
浅礁光影跳投。
触处珥丝游。
雨点如旋沫,
欲语还休。
海峤沧凉,
忽见千尺涌潮头。

湾环相对通幽。
慢镜头逆转,
蚀洞灵湫。
烟屿杳蒙,
分流混沌,
漏天谁补氐惆。
湿地色尘留。
万状安可度,
凝霭虹楼。
水国淹缠岁月,
见一缕青浮。

About this poem

This poem creates a flowing rhythm that mirrors the continuous rain and the tumultuous environment it describes. It offers a tapestry of sensations that draw the reader into the landscape and the emotional undertones that accompany it. The poet invites readers to engage with themes of despair, beauty, and introspection. The interplay of light and dark, the connection to history, and the reflections on personal struggle create a multi-layered experience that resonates deeply with human emotions. The poem serves as a reminder of the complexity of existence, where moments of joy and sorrow coexist, shaping our understanding of the world and ourselves. 

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Written on July 07, 2022

Submitted by chinamcc8 on December 04, 2023

Modified by chinamcc8 on July 14, 2024

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William He

William Yu He graduated from two of the most prestigious law schools in China respectively, also studied in Heidelberg, Cambridge and Harvard. He has published dozens of classical poems and lyrics in Chinese language. Ten classic-style Chinese poems have been included in a poetry anthology published by a famous publishing house in Hong Kong. Three of his poems were collected in the anthology “call my name and I 'll be there" published in February, 2024. He is know for five of his poems included in the anthology in English "Dancing on Moonbeams" published in USA in September, 2024. He already published his English poetry anthology "Eyes Wide Open: Poems by William He" in USA. more…

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  • ladyygracious
    A hauntingly beautiful and contemplative passage, evoking a sense of melancholy and introspection, set against the backdrop of a misty, lone landscape by Victoria Bay, weaving together imagery and allusions to explore the human experience of sorrow, longing, and the search for meaning, with the natural world serving as a poignant reminder of the passage of time and the mysteries that lie beyond. 
    LikeReply25 days ago
    • chinamcc8
      Your interpretation touches upon the very essence of what I intended to convey. The imagery of the misty, solitary landscape and the emotional undercurrent of sorrow and longing are so deeply woven into the piece, and I’m truly grateful that these elements came through so vividly for you. The idea of the natural world as both a mirror to the human condition and a reminder of time’s elusive nature is something I hold dear, and it’s incredibly rewarding to know that it was perceived in such a meaningful way. 
      LikeReply24 days ago
  • Emile
    Beautiful
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • crucifiedinhim2
    Awesome
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • Adroity
    This poem by William He vividly describes a rainy scene at Victoria Harbor, painting a picture of nature's power and beauty amidst the downpour. The imagery of the rain cascading down, the colorful lights, and the reflections in the water creates a sense of movement and atmosphere. The poet's use of language to depict the ferocity of the weather and the connection between heaven and earth through slow motion is striking. The references to Tennyson's statue and the imagery of pebbles sinking woes deep in the water add layers of depth to the poem, inviting readers to contemplate the complexities of human emotions and nature's elements. The poem beautifully captures the essence of Victoria Harbor in the rain, blending the physical landscape with emotional introspection. 
    LikeReply6 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      My sincere gratitude for your thoughtful and evocative comment about my work.
      LikeReply24 days ago
  • Pruett1023
    Thank you for sharing your poem about rain with us. Keep writing and inspiring others.
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • janicem.43112
    the imagery in this piece is sublime...so beautifully written!
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • jackg.26131
    Some wonderful imagery here a real slice of life fantastic poem
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • jerryl.01657
    Stunning Working.
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • israel_u
    Alfred Tennyson, great poet.
    LikeReply7 months ago
  • israel_u
    Kunfu fighting.
    LikeReply7 months ago

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