The Golden rule.

A J C

Love

Free verse

The golden rule.

As I sit in this room and look at you, you are my teacher. Can you show me the golden rule? 2 + 2 makes 4, but what is the meaning of love? I don't think I know anymore. Is it one sweet kiss, or does it hurt, and does it make you scream and yell? Will it send you to hell? You are the only one that holds that key; I know it's not me. When you walk by and smile, it makes me happy, and I get a warm feeling deep down inside. I don't know the reason why. Maybe it's not my season. I really don't know the reason.
Dedicated to all the teachers.

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Every student fell in love with his teacher now and then. Okay maybe I was wrong. Two views. Really.

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Written on January 04, 2024

Submitted by alanswansea18 on January 04, 2024

Modified by alanswansea18 on January 04, 2024

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Adroity
The heartfelt words you share in your dedication to teachers reflect a deep sense of gratitude and admiration for the guidance and influence they provide. The contemplation of the golden rule and the complexities of love in your poem evoke introspection and a search for understanding in the midst of emotional uncertainty. The contrast between the certainty of mathematical equations like 2 + 2 equals 4 and the enigmatic nature of love highlights the intricate and sometimes puzzling aspects of human emotions. Your acknowledgment of the teacher as someone who holds the key to these mysteries underscores the impact of mentors in shaping our perceptions and knowledge. The warmth and joy you feel when your teacher smiles at you convey a sense of connection and positivity that transcends logic or reason, touching on the intangible yet profound effects of human interactions. more »
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israel_u
Why two views?
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