Merchant of Soul



Why does no one come
to my sincere stall?
It's market day at school,
where we showcase, for all,

our products of beauty.
Our creations. Our work.
For them to recognize
our inner worth.

Hello! Excuse me!
Would you like to see my gems?
It's made from hopes and dreams.
Cased in my spirit's hems.

But they walk on by
without noticing my smile.
Perhaps they didn't mean to.
Perhaps it's guile.

Katie's stall's the best!
I'm sure she'll win.
Everyone comments
about her ideas within.

But it's fine if they don't come.
I have Daddy here.
A day-off from helping
people calm their fear.

He's a social worker, see.
Consoling all who are lost.
Finding them a home
without charging a cost.

Daddy says it's crucial
that I enter this show.
It's not about who buys.
It's about how I grow.

By exposing my gems
I'll reveal my soul,
see my color's beauty,
and make me whole.

So I'll keep my stall open
for today and all tomorrows.
If my gems stay dust free,
they won't turn into sorrows.

About this poem

We all are God's children. He wants us to show our beautiful selves to the world. Sometimes, without receiving recognition, we get disheartened. The real magic, though, is when we recognize ourselves.

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Written on February 02, 2024

Submitted by lugesan_r on February 02, 2024

Modified by lugesan_r on February 03, 2024

1:11 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXB CXDX CEXE XFXF XGXG AXXX CHXH XIDI EJCJ XKCK
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 979
Words 219
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Lugesan Reddy

 · 1985 · Toronto

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  • luisestable1
    In this poem the subject realizes the situation and remains hopeful. The things wanting to be seen are not material or concrete but of the soul like the smile shown.
    The poem has a story easy to follow and the flow is not bad.
    This is a poem deserving readers. 
    LikeReply 19 months ago
  • AIDA
    This poem, "Merchant of Soul," beautifully captures the innocence and resilience of a young girl who is sharing her creations with the world. The enthusiasm and positivity that shines through the words are truly inspiring.

    The theme of inner worth and self-expression is wonderfully depicted, reminding us of the importance of recognizing and appreciating the unique beauty within each of us. The portrayal of the girl's stall being overlooked while she observes the admiration for Katie's stall adds depth to the poem, showing both disappointment and resolve.

    One improvement suggestion would be to enhance the flow and rhythm of the poem. Consider revisiting the structure and word choices to create a consistent and seamless flow throughout. This will help in further engaging the reader and enhancing the emotional impact of the poem.

    Additionally, expanding on the girl's emotions and thoughts as she watches others pass by her stall could deepen the connection between the reader and the protagonist. This will allow the reader to fully empathize with her while highlighting the strength and determination she possesses.

    Overall, the poem "Merchant of Soul" is a heartfelt composition that celebrates the power of self-expression and resilience. With a few improvements to the flow and rhythm, as well as additional emotional depth, this poem has the potential to truly shine. Keep up the great work!
     
    LikeReply9 months ago

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