Two Souls Intertwined



That very first moment, your personality shone bright
I still vividly recall how I felt that night
That big beaming smile that you wear so well
From that moment on, you had me under your spell
 
I was entranced as I looked into your glorious green eyes
Suddenly overcome with a feeling I didn’t recognise
It rocked me again as we laughed on our first date
I knew right away that I was sharing a moment with my soulmate
 
Starting as friends helped us build a solid foundation
Our lives now entangled for the entire duration
I love those mornings when I watch you sleep
Such magical moments I’m so fortunate to reap
 
As you stand before me on our wedding day
Looking so scintillating in every way
Gazing into your eyes, my heart still trembles inside
Because that’s the place where you lovingly reside
 
Finally, we have become husband and wife
I really want to ensure you live a wonderful life
I promise to care for you until the very end
Then we’ll continue in heaven, my darling friend

About this poem

This poem is a love letter to my beautiful wife.

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Written on June 16, 2024

Submitted by Lee_Geoghegan on June 16, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCXA DDEE FFGG HHII
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 996
Words 184
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Lee Geoghegan

 · 1983 · Dublin

Lee Geoghegan holds an honours bachelor degree in horticulture, He has always had a keen interest in plants and wildlife, He finds it extremely relaxing when he is working in his greenhouse at his local allotment site. His poem entitled ‘Beautiful Day' depicts how he gazes upon nature and how the natural world resonates so deeply within his heart. Lee has always enjoyed poetry, his favourite poem has always been The Lake Isle of Innisfree by W.B Yeats, the poem paints a vivid picture of tranquility for him and resonates deeply. Lee is currently working on various projects and his ambition is to become a talented and respected poet. more…

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