i promise
what is going on your mind?
light shivers coming over your spine
all the memories drained in your memory line
sit down i’ll pour you a glass of wine
tell me every thing that bothers
your speech will linger on my brain
cause every single word you’re say
is like a cut that might remain
i swear it’s never gone away
i’ll care for you as same each day
nothing will ever made my mind
to change the truth you share
all metaphors in written songs
is just a shade on writers souls
as much as your confession be
forever gone away with me
About this poem
we’re not talking anymore. but this poem exists ;)
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Written on December 01, 2023
Submitted by vaatova906 on August 09, 2024
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABBB XCDC DDAX XXEE |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 551 |
Words | 119 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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