Identity: Under You



I,
I fell in between,
Silently hidden,
Forgotten in the middle.
Pressed in the gaps
Between your snaps
And the cracks of your riddles.

Looking to you for cues,
Waiting on clues,
So I can shift-shape
Into whom or what you want me to be—
So I don’t weigh down your life
With mine.

I stay here silent,
The knot in my throat—hidden,
Forgotten in the middle
Of this emotional mess,
Walking light as air
To avoid cracking the eggs
You so carefully spread.

But I don’t know
How much more of this I can take
Before I break—
Splintered, right here, in the middle.

Who am I today?
Who do you want me to be?
If it means,
We’ll go back to the beginning—
When I,
Was enough,  
And your words dripped
Nothing but—
Sweet, untainted honey—
On me.

About this poem

This poem is a raw exploration of the ways identity can be suppressed and reshaped under the weight of someone else’s expectations—particularly when those expectations come from a narcissist. It’s about the silent sacrifices we make, the cracks where resentment and longing take root, and the emotional toll of trying to conform to someone else’s version of who we should be. "Identity: Under You" is my attempt to give voice to the hidden struggles and suppressed cries for authenticity. It’s a confrontation, a reflection, and, ultimately, a call to reclaim one’s true self. 

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Written on December 22, 2024

Submitted by L.B.Fisher on December 22, 2024

Modified by L.B.Fisher on December 22, 2024

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 753
Words 162
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 7, 4, 10

Luciana Fisher

 · 1982 · Niteroi RJ

Luciana Fisher is a Brazilian-American immigrant, rising poet, and passionate writer currently pursuing a BA in Social Sciences with a concentration in Economics at New York University (NYU). After graduating with honors from BMCC and earning an associate's degree in the Arts of Economics, she reignited her passion for poetry, which helped her in overcoming challenges after a cancer diagnosis. Her writing explores themes of identity, vulnerability, personal growth, and the intricacies of communication through poetry and prose. more…

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  • gary_dean
    You're on a roll, Luciana. I have heard this tale before, but not with your style and "voice". I see several fresh metaphors, "pressed in the gaps/ between the snaps. and, "avoid cracking the eggs/ you so carefully laid." I feel I recognize the dilemma of this woman. Yet, I think this is a past version of her life. It has the flavor of deep reflection, straightening out the lingering past for catharsis. I like it. 
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