Sun Syndrome ( Version B )



Sun Syndrome, a cosmic disorder
Within my inner core it takes over
A burning sensation, a fiery blaze
That consumes my being in so many ways
It starts with a whisper, a gentle heat
A spark of light, a subtle heartbeat
But soon it grows, into a raging fire
A sun within me, a burning desire
My thoughts ignite, my passions ignite
A solar storm, a dazzling light
My mind races, my soul takes flight
I am immersed in a world of pure delight
The colors around me, so vibrant and bold
The sky above me, a canvas, untold
The warmth on my skin, a heavenly embrace
I am in harmony, with this sacred space
But just like the sun, my fire can dim
And the emptiness creeps, my spirit grows dim
The darkness consumes, my inner core
A sunless sky, a void to explore
The once vibrant colors, now dull and gray
The light within me, fading away
The warmth turns cold, a bitter chill
My sun syndrome, now a bitter pill
But within the darkness, a glimmer of hope
A flicker of light, a way to cope
My inner core, a resilient force
A sun that shines, through any course
For even when the sun sets, it will rise again
And my inner core, will overcome the pain
The fire will reignite, the light will shine
My sun syndrome, a constant divine
So I embrace my inner sun, in all its glory
For it is a part of me, my own untold story
A cosmic disorder, a beautiful curse
My inner core, always ready to disperse
The light and the darkness, a balance within
A sun syndrome, that I'll always win
For it is what makes me, unique and whole
My inner core, a sun within my soul.


Authorship by Mr. Dashaun Rashod Snipes
©️ Mr. Dashaun Rashod Snipes
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Written on January 11, 2025

Submitted by Mr.Dashaun_Snipes2313 on January 11, 2025

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Scheme AABBCCAADDDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQRR SSX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,639
Words 319
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 40, 3

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