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Break up thoughts

clifton redmond

Days end as days begin
Alone and incomplete
Shattered dreams are pains wield
Despair is true defeat

Not seeing you the scorching loss
Is surging through my veins
Every song reminds me of how
I will never love again
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Submitted on October 15, 2012

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Scheme XAXA XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 207
Words 39
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
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clifton redmond

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