This Deep Hole



This deep hole in me, just wants to be left alone...sitting here just makes my insides turn.
So please let this be the last sad song I have to sing.

Sometimes, I feel there no compassion in people all they see is their reflection.
Don't you see this hole leaves me sitting alone just turning my insides around.
So let this be the last sad song I have to sing.

So prey for me, that this darkness is out of me...all I want to see is the light.
I am ready to be done with this sh*t, but still it will be behind me to remind me of what I have done.

So please let this be the last sad song I have to sing.
Take a pill, let it take away the pain...so take another.

This feeling I all I have right now is sadness, being this way hurts me deep in my heart.
There is no pain killer that can take it away.
Everything in life is not fair, so for now I will let things go by
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Submitted on June 23, 2012

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Max Hornbogen

My name is Max D. Hornbogen and I live in Marquette Michigan all my life. When I started writing it was during my brothers graduation from high school. I really don't know the year.Now I am 22 years old, while I was growing up my dad died in a car accident during the winter. Some of my pomes are about him, a lot of my others ones are personal. Most of them deal with everyday life and the struggles that I deal with. Also some of them are kind of dark, but I do have a wide variety of everything.The one thing that I love the most out of my writing is that it is an outlet, it's like my own world. I get to say whatever I want. I love music of all kinds, also it's another reason I love writing my poems. I always study lyrics by other music artist that are out there.Also I got to have music on while I write my poems.I have been writing 5 years so far more…

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