Analysis of Bet You Thought
Bet you thought you could undo
the final ending of that act.
Like a painter
who will brush a tiny touch
of white over the blue
to cover a spot
which looks too bold,
or an actor who
forgets part of a line
then improvises so that
audience doesn’t catch on
to the flaw.
Bet you thought I would forget
your last act and press rewind.
Such as a writer holding pen does
to remove a word, a phrase,
that makes no sense,
drawing line through it
then starting again.
Bet you thought I would ignore
like I did in days of past,
when I held back a tear that formed,
or placed my feelings on a shelf.
Always believing
that love could conquer all.
To you, I was the calm
before a storm and after it,
for when rain and winds disappeared,
neither would look back to see
the destruction left behind.
Bet you thought I’d always be
your safe harbor after sailing,
a perpetual fountain for your thirst,
or a solid wall that’d never fall.
You sat back embracing
the comfort I provided,
as you read
a self selected tale of love
from a book without an end.
Then you,
like a paradox
that walks and breathes,
picked up pen to write
the story’s ending.
You left, said not one word.
Like a winner taking all.
Bet you thought that I would follow,
place my feet within your shadow
whispering words,
asking you to stay.
Would have been
a final chapter to your liking,
like a taste of honey you could swallow.
Bet you thought,
but you were wrong.
Now it’s time you think again.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111101 01010111 1010 1110101 111001 11001 1111 11101 011101 110011 100111 101 1111101 1110110 110101011 1010101 1111 10111 11001 1111101 1110111 11110111 11110101 1010 111101 111101 01010101 1110101 1011111 0010101 111111 11101010 0010010111 101011101 111010 0101010 111 01010111 1010111 11 1010 1101 11111 0110 111111 1010101 11111110 1110111 1001 10111 111 010101110 1011101110 111 1101 1111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,510 |
Words | 332 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 44, 12 |
Lines Amount | 56 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 565 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 139 |
About this poem
After so many years of the trying, there comes moment when it’s time to let go.
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Written on January 03, 2024
Submitted by Giselavigil on January 03, 2024
Modified by Giselavigil on January 04, 2024
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