morning comes to life



Morning comes to life
Dust settles on the open road
Earth rise from the stillness
behind  setting suns
 
Flower petals open lotuses traced in wisper's
that fall like snowflakes  amidst the cotton fields
shadows of  dreams leave  footprints in the
Autumn of our lives

Flow of memories across rivers of  time
and  shadows at its edge
 
Season lights blossom
In mirrored reflections
On the shapes of branches
Outlines traces of colored leaves
Held trembling in the shaded light
 
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Submitted by sunrasmoondog on June 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAB AXXX XX XBXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 479
Words 83
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2, 5

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2 Comments
  • Adroity
    Your poetic words beautifully capture the essence of nature awakening with the morning light, where dust settles on the open road, and earth rises from the stillness behind setting suns. The imagery of flower petals opening like lotuses, whispers falling like snowflakes in cotton fields, and shadows of dreams leaving footprints in the autumn of our lives paints a serene and reflective picture of life's transitions and the passage of time. The flow of memories across rivers of time and the interplay of shadows at the edge evoke a sense of contemplation and the beauty found in the changing seasons and reflections of nature's elements. 
    LikeReply4 months ago
  • Adroity
    Thank you for sharing your poetic piece. Your words beautifully capture the essence of nature's transitions and the delicate beauty found in everyday moments. The imagery of morning awakening, flower petals opening, and shadows of dreams leaving footprints paints a vivid picture of the interconnectedness of life and the passage of time. Your poetic expressions reflect a deep connection to nature and introspection, creating a serene and contemplative atmosphere within your verses. 
    LikeReply4 months ago

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