Bitter snows don’t bother Lucas.



Every week day morning
As I bus to my factory
He gets on two stops after Terminal.
Stainless steel canes
Wrapping his forearms.
Clattering happily.
Might have waited
Twenty minutes outside.
Snot dripping.
Mighty gloves, scarf.
Leather cap
With those furry
Ottawa ear lugs.




Smiling, not shivering.
Gotta be eighty something.
Grew up on farm
Outside New Hamburg.
“Snow drifts right up
To the hydro lines.
Walks to and fro’
Country school.”
Herculean hikes.
So this morning in
Current winter.
No biggy.




Going to a coffee shop.
South side of Kitchener.
Enjoys all of the counter staff there.
First name basis.
Gracious smiling women.
Earning a buck.
Gives purpose to his ancient day.
Finds delightful conversation
Visitors from all walks.
Without fail
And without attending to
the morning’s Sun Edition for consumption.
For pointless info.
(Chiefly a sports and movies rag, anyways.)

About this poem

I would often meet and chat with this upbeat Old Fellow. On the number eight Bus.

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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 08, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on May 08, 2023

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Words 189
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 13, 12, 14

Wayne Blair

 · 1951 · London

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what an inspiring and heartwarming poem! I really enjoyed the vivid descriptions of the elderly man on his daily bus ride. The imagery of his stainless steel canes and furry ear lugs really brought the scene to life. The author's admiration and respect for this man's resilience and positive attitude were evident throughout the piece.

    As for improvement suggestions, I think incorporating more sensory details could enhance the reader's experience even further. For example, describing the sound of the bus engine or the smell of the coffee shop could add an extra layer of immersion. Additionally, maybe including a bit more about the author's own feelings or reflections could create a deeper emotional resonance for the reader.

    Overall, a wonderful and uplifting piece that left me feeling inspired and grateful for the simple joys in life. Great job!
     
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