Loving you



In the quiet dawn where the sun first breaks,  
I find my heart in the warmth it makes,  
A canvas painted in hues of gold,  
Each stroke a story of love untold.  

With every whisper of the morning breeze,  
I feel your essence, a sweet tease,  
Irresistible charm, like a siren’s call,  
In your embrace, I’ve found it all.  

Your laughter dances like a melody sweet,  
A symphony of joy that makes my heart beat,  
In the rhythm of life, you’re the sweetest refrain,  
A song of passion that courses through my veins.  

Oh, how you shine, like stars in the night,  
Guiding my soul with your radiant light,  
In your eyes, I see galaxies swirl,  
A universe crafted, just you and me, girl.  

With every heartbeat, I’m drawn to your fire,  
A flame that ignites my deepest desire,  
In the warmth of your love, I find my home,  
In the depths of your heart, I’ll never roam.  

You’re the sun in my sky, the moon in my dreams,  
The laughter that bubbles, the joy that redeems,  
In the tapestry of life, you’re the thread that weaves,  
A masterpiece crafted, in love, we believe.  

Through the storms and the trials, we’ll stand side by side,  
With you as my anchor, my heart’s trusted guide,  
In the dance of our lives, we’ll sway and we’ll twirl,  
Forever entwined, my beautiful girl.  

Your touch is a spark, igniting the night,  
A passion that burns, fierce and bright,  
In the depths of your gaze, I lose all control,  
You’re the keeper of secrets, the key to my soul.  

With every moment, my love only grows,  
Like a river that flows, where the wildflower blows,  
In the garden of dreams, you’re the rarest bloom,  
A fragrance of love that dispels all gloom.  

I’ll cherish your laughter, your tears, and your fears,  
In the tapestry woven through all of our years,  
With each passing day, I’ll love you anew,  
In the depths of my heart, I’m forever with you.  

So here’s my promise, as vast as the sea,  
To love you with all that I am, endlessly,  
In the dance of forever, I’ll hold you so tight,  
Gonna love you, my darling, with all of my might.  

Through the seasons of life, as the years come and go,  
In the warmth of your love, I’ll always know,  
That you are my treasure, my heart’s greatest song,  
In this beautiful journey, together we belong.  

So let the world witness, let the heavens see,  
The love that we share, wild and free,  
With every heartbeat, I’ll shout it out loud,  
Gonna love you forever, I’m endlessly proud.  

In the tapestry of time, our love will remain,  
A testament written in joy and in pain,  
For you are my everything, my heart’s purest view,  
In this life and the next, I’m gonna love you.  
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Written on September 28, 2024

Submitted by Sallys.Jack on September 28, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEFX GGHH IIJJ KKXX LLHH GGMM NNOO PPQQ RRGG SSTT RRUU FFQQ
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,720
Words 544
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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